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    Author: Big J
    ASL Info:    22/m/AZ
    Elite Ratio:    2.25 - 20/29/12
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 255
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       My little brother worte this poem for a englich class i thought it was pretty good so i put it up


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    Scabby knees and a snot filled nose,
    Drinking from a sun backed hose.
    Playing together til the sun goes down,
    Joyously laughing without a frown.

    Playing in dirt and finding bugs,
    Hiding from Their grannies hugs.
    Two young boys face adventure,
    Attempting to find grandpa's denture.

    Scaring girls and finding frogs,
    Throwing rocks, and chasing dogs.
    Stilling cookies from the shelf,
    Pretending to be Santa's elf.

    They say everything is learned in a book,
    But it is time to take a second look.
    Because friendship is discovered while at play,
    On a warm sunny early spring day.




    Submitted on 2005-12-18 00:30:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      im musician and i need your poem to make it song ....The poem is good and innocence .i like it...the e-mail address is megavati@otenet.gr answer me about the intelectual property of the poem if you want.......thanks......
    | Posted on 2006-10-23 00:00:00 | by megavatis | [ Reply to This ]
      Aw! This is a really cute poem! He did a really good job. Tell him to keep up the writing!! I want to read more!
    | Posted on 2005-12-18 00:00:00 | by doanle10 | [ Reply to This ]
      This is awesome. Other than some small typo's I would say that this is a perfect poem.
    I can tell you that I relate to this even though my kids days are long gone.

    Playing in dirt and finding bugs,
    Hiding from Their grannies hugs.
    Two young boys face adventure,
    Attempting to find grandpa's denture

    HAHAHA
    This is my favorite and I can also relate to this part the most.

    Hiding from Grannies hugs was a must. My granny had whiskers and she always smothered me to much.

    Trying to find grandpa's dentures. HEEHEE

    Well I have said enough but I will fav this because if the innocence that is captured within it.

    Your brother did an awesome job

    Respect and Admiration

    Clyde
    | Posted on 2005-12-18 00:00:00 | by Wisdom Seeker | [ Reply to This ]
      Ahh this is quite cute, your lil brother did a good job. Made me smile in a few places too. Nice poem keep up the good work :)
    | Posted on 2005-12-18 00:00:00 | by shorti | [ Reply to This ]



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