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    dots Submission Name: Me 2dots
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    Author: DrewDilla
    ASL Info:    25/M/Chicago
    Elite Ratio:    2.81 - 131/196/51
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 721
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 709



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       now this I took some time on. And I think there should be more. So let me know. I wont to write a song so it needs more.


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    dotsMe 2dots
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    Sorry this notepad doesn't have a spell check. Remember I was in a wreck. My brain got squashed like it got flushed. It erased some memories like there was fairiesí guiding my flight. So I would be alright. They kept me from dying, Because I was fling and no I don't have wings. I have none of those things but I didn't brake a bone yes I was alone. My insurance didn't cover it. I really wasn't lit had um... Like three beers I never had tears because I don't remember that day. Glad it's out the way. See I passed out at the wheel don't drink so my brain can heal. Because it kills off different brain cells while it's trying to grow to create a new flow




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      this gives people a look at who you are in a way. You really opend yourself up to people. i also agree with the last person who commented. But the spelling is better. Well good job.

    ~peace~
    | Posted on 2005-12-18 00:00:00 | by cannibal | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a nice example of brutality without remorse but you should really fix those spelling mistakes man, they take so much from the effect.
    | Posted on 2005-12-18 00:00:00 | by The Imbroglio | [ Reply to This ]
      This is another well written write from you
    I love your writing style
    You bring the reader deep into your
    subconcious and show them exactly what it is that keeps you moving
    Excellent Job My Friend!!!
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2006-05-22 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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