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    dots Submission Name: Celebrate Christmasdots
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    Author: dycrain
    ASL Info:    56/F/U.S.A.
    Elite Ratio:    7.33 - 51/54/19
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 678
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 573



    Description:
       This style of poetry is called Etheree and Double Etheree.

    Form is: 1-10 lines each having the syllable count of the number line it is. (Etheree)

    (Double Etheree) Same as single in reverse, 10-1 syllables.

    This is, obviously, for Christmas.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsCelebrate Christmasdots
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    Christ
    Christmas
    Christmas cel
    Christmas cele
    Christmas celebrates
    Christmas celebrates the
    Christmas celebrates the birth
    Christmas celebrates the birth of
    Christmas celebrates the birth of our
    Christmas celebrates the birth of our Lord
    Hallelujah, the King our Savior's born
    Hallelujah, the King our Savior's
    Hallelujah, the King our Sav
    Hallelujah, the King our
    Hallelujah, the King
    Hallelujah, the
    Hallelujah
    Hallelu
    Halle
    Hal




    Submitted on 2005-12-18 06:01:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hi Yvonne...wow this looks really cool. I love the form and what you have done with this one. I like how you are always trying new things with your writing. I dont think I would dare do something like this. This is a very nice piece of work you have here. And always nice to read a christmas poem at christmastime hee hee! I am impressed! Take care.

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2005-12-21 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]


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