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    dots Submission Name: Grace of Christmasdots
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    Author: dycrain
    ASL Info:    56/F/U.S.A.
    Elite Ratio:    7.33 - 51/54/19
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 732
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 764



    Description:
       This style poem is called Acrostic. The first letter of each sentence or line begins with the letter placement of the poem's title or message. Does not have to rhyme.


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    dotsGrace of Christmasdots
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    Obligingly, on bended knees

    Unto You, I now bow my head

    Reverentially, man is blessed

    Sing of glory, for He does come

    Adoration and Love for You

    Venerable, with reverence

    I invite You into my heart

    Only through You, we come to Him

    Righteous and Holy, cleanse my soul

    Imbrued, power to love and heal

    Saving man from eternal hell

    Birth, immaculate conception

    Oh, Holy One, I do repent

    Revealed in worship, You still live

    Now, hallelujah, He is born



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    Yvonne Marie Crain

    December 18, 2005




    Submitted on 2005-12-18 06:15:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Another lovely Christmas poem by you! I love how you vary your writing styles the way you do. I am impressed as this type of poem isnt easy to write having the first letter of every line be predetermined...'our savior is born'. A very inspiring and well written poem this is. And a wonderful message conveyed with your words. Nothing here to criticise, just a lovely poem. Take care and have a wonderful holiday my friend!

    Lorna
    | Posted on 2005-12-22 00:00:00 | by lmz | [ Reply to This ]


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