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    dots Submission Name: Belongingdots
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    Author: xmangaXfreakx
    ASL Info:    13/f/IL
    Elite Ratio:    2.77 - 31/30/22
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 968
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 500



    Description:
       i wrote this about Access, my youth group.


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    dotsBelongingdots
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    Finally.
    Among this group of
    ONE-TIME STRANGERS
    I can be me.
    purely, totally
    ME.
    No dumbing down,
    no acting up,
    just
    ME.
    I can pour out my soul
    and they'll all take a glass.
    add something and put
    me
    back
    together.
    I'm so tired of not being able to fit in without being smashed up and bent to fit,
    and I'm still not quite right.
    It feels good to
    FIT.




    Submitted on 2005-12-18 14:31:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow,nice write. it made me feel all warm inside.
    i usually dont feel like i belong but with this poem,i can relate to the thoughts when i feel happy like that.
    good job.
    and Merry Christmas!
    _dancing_alone_
    | Posted on 2005-12-18 00:00:00 | by _Dancing_Alone_ | [ Reply to This ]
      I think that it is fabulous that you have a place that allows you to feel that way.
    Now that you know what that is use it.
    Feed off the warmth you find there and use it in your writing. I believe you will be surprised at the result.
    | Posted on 2005-12-18 00:00:00 | by NeonOrangePrize | [ Reply to This ]
      i felt that way when i joined my church. everybody is real and just cool! pouring out your soul into someone elses glass. hit me right in the ticker. i would be lost without an empty glass waiting to collect my feelings. and in return fill it back up with a sweeter nectur that relinishes my soul. good poem girl, keep writing
    | Posted on 2005-12-22 00:00:00 | by sunshinejmh | [ Reply to This ]


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