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Murky water washing a stick downstream a small wooden craft glides with a wobbly beam animals crowd around, gurgle and drink as the small branch makes its way to the brink Covered in green moss it travels past a dam beavors are working to clog and ram the bough hurtles on through a narrow passage way leaving the rodents working and leaving them at bay The moon glows brightly in the black Autumn sky a fish shoots upwards suspended as if to fly the limb moves underneath the fishs tail racing with the current, never stumling, never fail The Creek groans aloud wth insects and birds the sounds are abstract and often can't express them with words the pond seizes up and stops the branch short the cleavor beavers have created a well built fort the fort angers me and makes me ponder why on earth can't a brach just wander go on its way and avoid the bend go on a journey and make it to the end |
The rhyming scheme in this was excellent. It was really well thought-out, and although I'm not the biggest nature freak, this poem was really calming and serene. My only criticism is that there are sparse typos/grammatical errors in this piece.| Posted on 2005-12-18 00:00:00 | by Faye Florentine | [ Reply to This ] | |