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    dots Submission Name: The Curse Of Santa Cruzdots
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    Author: edwardgalaxy
    ASL Info:    23/M/UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.42 - 8/6/8
    Words: 40
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 893
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 209



    Description:
       The meaning behind it is too long to go into really, but its pretty much just about jealousy.


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    dotsThe Curse Of Santa Cruzdots
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    Pucker up and kiss the curse of Santa Cruz cos we've gone from bright lights to our knees and now im waiting for the names to drop like bombs and i'll be under every one tasting never again all over.




    Submitted on 2005-12-19 06:04:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow, and, um-nope, Wow pretty much says it all. Wouldn't change a thing. 'tasting never again all over' -that's exactly what jealosy does to us.


    ~Side of Keen~
    | Posted on 2005-12-27 00:00:00 | by Side of Keen | [ Reply to This ]


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