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    dots Submission Name: arma greed doomdots
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    Author: papalegba
    ASL Info:    45/male/schenectady ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.78 - 52/42/28
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsarma greed doomdots
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    They seem to say
    The end is at hand
    For it could even be today
    Will it be by plutoium sand
    Commet or meteoric clay
    Final destruction of our holy land
    Could this just be God's play

    How could we tell
    If the end has already come and gone
    To me this is an eternal hell
    Almost like the weeds in the front lawn
    Water has turned to blood in the sacred well
    Fish die before they spawn
    Or could this be a bad witch's spell




    Submitted on 2005-12-19 10:39:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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