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    dots Submission Name: Mermaiddots
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    Author: DrewDilla
    ASL Info:    25/M/Chicago
    Elite Ratio:    2.81 - 131/196/51
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       It woulk suck very bad if you couldn't have sex.


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    dotsMermaiddots
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    did u ever wonder this? how mermaids have kids, but there all female. So know is man going to pollinate. there has to be away. the only hole is the mouth. So the puke out the kid. There has to be men. We just don't see them. So were does the guys pollen come from? UMMMMMMMMMMM... I know they kiss and thatís the pollination. That would suck, cause you can't kiss all the time. Kids would be popping out all left and right, but kissing is so wonderful. The transfer of human fluids. feels so good with your sole mate. So I would hate to be a mermaid.




    Submitted on 2005-12-20 01:36:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hmmm.. interesting theory you have there. I think they must have a hole, same as fish. They lay eggs, and there are mermen, ever seen The Little Mermaid? King Tryton.. anyway.. vomiting kids.. wow, that really would suck. But if they didn't lay eggs... I haven't a clue how they reproduce. There has to be another hole somewhere. I personally have never seen a mermaid so wouldn't know what they have. They have to pee and [censored]... hopefully they don't piss out their mouths.. ewwww...

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    | Posted on 2006-11-08 00:00:00 | by Holy Wood | [ Reply to This ]
      that was interesting, why to think out of the box.. keep it coming. did you ever wonder how Dolphins have kids, i bet its simaler...
    | Posted on 2005-12-20 00:00:00 | by Artist4rent | [ Reply to This ]
      good work...i liked it. This really makes you think. I mean really how do mermaids have babies...*ponders this for a moment* well good write keep em comin

    ~peace~
    | Posted on 2005-12-20 00:00:00 | by cannibal | [ Reply to This ]
      interesting way in writing a poem , a genuine idea with a strange structure but its fun i enjoyed reading it and , keep it up and keep your thoughts coming :)
    | Posted on 2005-12-20 00:00:00 | by Tarek Refaat | [ Reply to This ]


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