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    dots Submission Name: DO YOU LOVE ME?dots
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    Author: submarine
    Elite Ratio:    2.36 - 125/90/42
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       help me........ please......... somebody........


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    dotsDO YOU LOVE ME?dots
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    Another day's gone,
    The night is come,
    but my world is the same,
    i still think of you.
    even though i dont want to
    i cant help loving you.
    ans i sit alone wondering
    will i ever know...
    if you love me too?

    When i look at your eyes
    my heart aches,
    a pain of love so deep,
    but still seems strange.
    trying not to blush
    i hide my face
    just wishing i knew...
    if you love me too?




    Submitted on 2005-12-20 04:53:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I agree with the comments below. This poem made you feel like you were on the ege of a knife. I did sense as if you somehow knew that the object of your affection didn't feel the same about you. It's almost as if this person doesn't really know who you are...like maybe it's someone that you have a crush on? I'm not sure, but I do get a sense of hidden attraction here...Kelly
    | Posted on 2006-03-07 00:00:00 | by krs3332003 | [ Reply to This ]
      Your poem is very touching...It reminds me of my first relationship ever...I love how when people read this poem can easily relate to it...Well I can...I know it's not easy sitting around waiting to find out if the person you love loves you back...I absoultley love your poem..Kepp on writing :D
    | Posted on 2005-12-20 00:00:00 | by Hip-Hop Honey | [ Reply to This ]



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