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    dots Submission Name: MORE THAN A FRIENDdots
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    Author: submarine
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    dotsMORE THAN A FRIENDdots
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    Your my friend,and maybe even more,
    But i'm scared to let you know.
    A fear to lose,
    What we already have,
    A fear of being left alone.
    So i'll never tell,
    How i feel for you.
    And you'll never know,
    that to me....
    your more than a friend




    Submitted on 2005-12-20 05:24:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The feeling that eats away at you, constantly, like a fatal disease. That of which you can't cure. Love, in its worst stage, knowing how you feel, yet knowing the other person has no idea...that word 'friends', isn't it haunting in a situation like this?

    I think you expressed this feeling perfectly, it's almost as if I was in the situation myself. Ouch.
    Great read!

    Sorrel
    | Posted on 2005-12-21 00:00:00 | by SorrelsReality | [ Reply to This ]
      I kno how u feel...and my advice sometimes u gotta take a chance...but yea...so i liked it was short but it had a good point behind it!

    ~ Jessi ~
    | Posted on 2005-12-20 00:00:00 | by RainbowGirl | [ Reply to This ]
      Khan the fusious guy once said its better to lose a lie than have truth and never know it.
    Well, somebody said that, I think, or they should have anyways. If not I just did!
    OK, moving right along, your works here speak of a too often seen senario. WHY, be afraid to confront a friend, that seems to be a contradiction in the word friend. I know, I do not understand your feelings, so just be quiet!
    I myself was talking with a friend I went to school with several years ago, and she comfided she had a crush on me in tenth grade.
    I was going through withdrawal thinking I'd never get her attention, we both married and then found out we missed loves connection!
    I guess I'm a victim too! So I'll just shut up and be quiet like i said.
    Great writing, but of course you knew that!
    LATER
    | Posted on 2005-12-20 00:00:00 | by Clayton | [ Reply to This ]
      that was wonderful. i know completly what you're saying. My current boyfriend used to be my best friend in the entire world and i somehow fall in love with him along the way but i didnt want to say anything because i was afraid to lose him but it turned out that he felt the same. maybe you should tell the person how you feel. its better then keeping it locked away forever in your heart and you never know... they might like you back.

    Great job with this poem! you did wonderful! <33
    | Posted on 2005-12-20 00:00:00 | by the_forgotten | [ Reply to This ]
      Awwww...Short but sweet. I know EXACTLY how you feel because I am going through the same thing right about now. It sucks to be afraid to lose what you already have just to have something more...nice job

    <3 Adalae
    | Posted on 2005-12-20 00:00:00 | by lifeNsoul1224 | [ Reply to This ]



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