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    dots Submission Name: Their Lovedots
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    Author: RainbowGirl
    ASL Info:    14/F/Spfld Il
    Elite Ratio:    2.24 - 8/8/5
    Words: 307
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 215
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1954



    Description:
       This is abt me and my girlfriend who i love dearly!!! So yea...its a song by the way....lol


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    dotsTheir Lovedots
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    (Verse 1)
    This is how it looks,
    This is how it was meant to be,
    And even God can see,
    We can make it through anything.
    We will stay strong,
    For our love is not wrong.
    And your little sister,
    Looks down at us,
    And keeps us goin on and on.
    And for her our love grows strong.
    She knows we were meant to be,
    And she has talked to God,
    And made him see,
    He will let us meet again,
    A little butterfly will guide us,
    Our gardian angel will sing,
    She will sing.
    (Chorus)
    Don't you see,
    These two were meant to be,
    They go together so well,
    And even though they fight like hell,
    Their love always prefails.
    It is their love that cannot fail!
    Will not fail,
    Must not fail.
    It will never ever fail.
    (Verse 2)
    She laughs like you,
    She holds God's hand,
    She watches over you,
    Man oh Man,
    She flies around once in a while,
    And if you noticed the last time you saw a butterfly,
    Me and you were in a fight,
    And she flew back up,
    After we had made up,
    And she talked to God,
    She told him..
    (Chorus)
    (Verse 3)
    This is me and you,
    This is our story,
    That painfully is true,
    We got dealt the wrong cards along time ago,
    But that has all been made up,
    For now we have each other,
    And no one will bother,
    Tryin to break us up,
    Because they know of our love.

    Don't you see,
    Us two were meant to be,
    We go together so well,
    And even though we fight like hell,
    Our love always perfails.
    It is our love that cannot fail,
    Will not fail,
    It must not fail,
    It will never ever...
    Baby our love can never fail.







    Submitted on 2005-12-20 17:35:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Good write, I read it and was this is good, keep trying to figure out a melody in my head... then I went and saw your age and it made it better.. very impressive...
    | Posted on 2005-12-21 00:00:00 | by Artist4rent | [ Reply to This ]



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