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    dots Submission Name: New Orleans my citydots
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    Author: heavy knowledge
    ASL Info:    15/m/slidell, L.a.(N.O.)
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 106/156/34
    Words: 356
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Serious
    Total Views: 961
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1964



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       this is alil sumtin deicated to my city look out for verse 2 and 3 to come at u soon


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    dotsNew Orleans my citydots
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    Chorus
    They say u dont come bak when that line go flat
    Cause a nigga not at homa can u picture that
    The same goverment that gives tax cut can't even support me
    And to dat bitch fema i like ya to a tolerable degree
    You know i run dem 504 streetsso niggas call me vick
    My my rhymes is lick a disease they leave niggas sick
    (2x)

    Verse 1
    Welcome to new orleans and deeper into the east side
    complication of the situation cause a nigga to ba a homicide
    And if a nigga can"t swim he get a close casket
    Let the tears of my city be the fuel for this rap shit
    And that just the beging of the tale of the new atlantis
    Where girls swollow head as is they where prayin mantis
    And my flow blow u away like it was a supanova
    Doin the presedentail take over as if my name was hova
    Come to the 9th find urself lookin for a plce to shelter
    Have a man puchin so much paper they might as well call him a pettler
    Go to uptown throw a midle and a pointer finger up to say hey
    and then i lyricly splatter a nigga brains at the end of the day
    Cause the n.o. give birth to rapper like souja slim and weezy f. the cater
    But in came the flood waters so givin birth becomes harder
    So i open the flood gates to let u be present in my city
    Where we got nothing but people smokin earth to make other dizzy
    And heres your green card to enter my hood
    Where we got alot of water but its all good (yeah)

    Chorus
    They say u dont come bak when that line go flat
    Cause a nigga not at homa can u picture that
    The same goverment that gives tax cut can't even support me
    And to dat bitch fema i like ya to a tolerable degree
    You know i run dem 504 streetsso niggas call me vick
    My my rhymes is lick a disease they leave niggas sick
    (2x)




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      And my flow blow u away like it was a supanova
    Doin the presedentail take over as if my name was hova

    And if a nigga can"t swim he get a close casket
    Let the tears of my city be the fuel for this rap [censored]

    look at lil chaz trying to rep his hood. u getting kinda good. but still not as good as me. we both know u can't touch me on that freestyling. those lines up there were tight as [censored]
    | Posted on 2006-05-30 00:00:00 | by young p | [ Reply to This ]
      this was great i am surprised you didnt get comments alot of people dont comment on what they read not sure why
    great post and enjoyable read

    adi
    | Posted on 2005-12-23 00:00:00 | by psychoneurosis | [ Reply to This ]
      And if a nigga can"t swim he get a close casket
    Let the tears of my city be the fuel for this rap [censored]
    And that just the beging of the tale of the new atlantis
    Where girls swollow head as is they where prayin mantis

    u still type like a drug addict but at least ur rapping got better. i don't know. u might be on my level now. bout time u posted dawg. the chorus was all right but the actual verse was tight as [censored]. definite fave. i'm bout to read the other ones. holla
    | Posted on 2005-12-23 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      this real good man....what kinda song you lookin to collaborate man, raw, smooth.what subject...I'll bring it man just tell me what kinda [censored] you want written


    Duece
    the aberrant soldier
    | Posted on 2005-12-22 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]
      Powerful lyrics. I feel rage coming from you when I read this. This was very raw and in your face. you brought the pain of Katrina to another level. Keep it up.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2005-12-22 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]


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