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    dots Submission Name: How We Standdots
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    Author: tinkerbellsas
    ASL Info:    22/f/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 67/66/32
    Words: 123
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsHow We Standdots
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    I wouldn't change a thing
    From yesterday's memories
    All the tears I've cried
    All the lonely nights
    Led me down the road to you
    I've learned so much
    From all the mistakes I've made
    They've got me here today
    Now is the moment ...
    Now is the time ...
    To say I love you
    To let you know how I really feel
    Staying together won't be easy
    In this world of change
    But you and I have found a love
    That can stand the test of time
    It will last through eternity
    It will never falter again
    Tonight we start anew
    Not knowing what mountains we'll have to climb
    Just knowing we'll conquer it all
    Because together forever is how we stand




    Submitted on 2005-12-20 19:24:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      how can no one comment on this! this is really good im adding it to my favorites! it reminded me of a relationship that i had wit my ex. but we didnt make it! i hope u guyz do though! i could relate to this a lot! good job!
    ~akaila evonne~
    | Posted on 2005-12-28 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]


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