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    dots Submission Name: i am singingdots
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    Author: in_a_trap
    ASL Info:    15/f/nc
    Elite Ratio:    3.94 - 77/50/20
    Words: 296
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 128
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1751



    Description:
       i was asked to write a happy poem for my son who jsut recently pasted away, so here it is, also i did need to write a poem about our memorys.


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    My dear son
    You are the sunshine in my hair
    You are the whistle in the wind
    You are my morning
    And my night
    You are my life
    The reason I live
    Your bright brown eyes
    Your dark brown hair
    Ten toes
    Ten fingers
    Every inch of your little body
    I loved you
    For your imperfections
    Your perfections
    I do believe you were perfect
    My entire heart was yours
    When you cried
    I was there
    When you wanted to be held I was there
    I was always there
    I remember the day you came home to me
    The first time you were put in my arms
    The first time I fed you
    All the things I done
    Every step I took with you in my arms
    Every time you looked up at me and smiled
    I remember
    And will always have you in my heart
    In a special box with your name on it
    You will always be my morning
    My night
    Till the day I die
    You were my child
    And only mine
    I might not of went into labor with you
    But you were mine
    You were shielded by the world with my wing
    I was the one who kept you from all the bad things in this world
    I remember when you pied on me
    When you were cranky and I soothed you
    The way I sang to you
    My sweet child
    Can you still hear my voice
    Can you still hear me singing that song every day
    “rock-a-by my baby”
    “in the tree top”
    You remember the day I sang that to you
    My heart still sings it for you
    Can you hear it
    I can
    My sweet child
    My River
    My dear son
    Smile for me
    I am singing




    Submitted on 2005-12-20 21:37:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I really enjoyed this alot. I am really glad you did put a happy poem on here about your son.

    I loved it.
    It showed how much you loved him & cared for him every moment you had together. It is even more special to think that he wasnt even yours. But you took him in & cared.

    I went to Honduras over the summer- worked at an orphanage. I met Charlie there. His is five & I said I would sponsor him. His mother lives near there & he has two sisters. The mom gave him away because she didnt want him anymore. I took him in, loved him & as a result.. before I left he called me mommy.

    Here I see the same thing for when he smiled at you. Looked up to you as his mother. You are more specail to the woman who gave birth to him because you took care of him more then so many would have.
    You have remembered him beautifully & know he looks down on you & smiles.
    You watched over him now it is his turn.
    take care& be happy
    ~jennifer
    | Posted on 2005-12-23 00:00:00 | by joy7542 | [ Reply to This ]
      what a great mother you are. your son gets all the love he needs and more. at the beginning, it had a rhyme, sort of, you kind of fell off track from it.
    | Posted on 2005-12-20 00:00:00 | by Itzmeemiflee | [ Reply to This ]



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