in love with someone beatiful -------------------------------------------
ive got chocolate on my nose
and you laugh
im in love with someone beautiful
we smile while they are talking
but im still afraid to tell you how i feel
i trip and drop my lunchbox
you pick it up
and smile again
i wish you werent so beautiful
then maybe i could forget
everyone says looks dont matter
but your smile only shows everything you are
and what you are is beatiful
and i cant seem to help but love you
ive got chocolate on my face
and love in my eyes
but you just dont see
and im too afraid to say anything
It's kind of sad that you've gotten 7 views on this poem yet no one has commented on such an excellent piece. I thought it was really good. It's hard to have feelings for someone and not have them notice even though it may be fairly apparent. It's even worse when you can't seem to tell them how you feel. I'm a writer that is very inclined to see punctuation in writing, but sometimes it can distract from the piece if done the wrong way. Without punctuation in this poem it adds an air of simplicity in an emotional piece. I enjoyed reading it.
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