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    dots Submission Name: The lovers pilgrimdots
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    Author: webdevil
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 113/105/43
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       words of worship


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    dotsThe lovers pilgrimdots
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    Eyes of expressed beauty
    Tongues of pleasureable delights
    Breasts of proud heritage
    Woman born of love.
    Here I am
    Knocking on your heart
    A pilgrim
    Seeking to worship
    At your sacred temple
    Where all my journeys end.




    Submitted on 2005-12-21 10:48:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      awwwwwwwwwwwww this was really sweet. i think you have a really nice way of showing your effection. this was beautiful it cheered me up alot thank you

    xoxo
    that girl
    | Posted on 2005-12-21 00:00:00 | by sweet sorenity | [ Reply to This ]


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