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    dots Submission Name: Have you.dots
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    Author: webdevil
    Elite Ratio:    3.2 - 113/105/43
    Words: 207
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Have you ever in your life
    Listend to nature
    Just a moment of subtle reflection.
    Have you ever breathed
    The serene freshness of air
    That sails the lofty mountains.
    Have you ever bathed
    The cool soothness of water
    That rises from the oceans depth.
    Have you ever listend
    To the melodious symphonies of sound
    That rides natures orchestra.
    Have you ever lain
    On the enchantment of grass
    That undulates with the land.
    Have you ever felt
    the warm licks of fire
    that bakes the sun
    have you ever been held
    in the homely embrace of a woman
    that passionately loves your heart.
    Have you ever laughed
    With the complete charm of a smile
    That echoes your soul
    Have you ever climbed
    The sinous curves of trees
    That seek the heavens.
    Have you ever guided
    The sweet innocence of children
    That sprouted from lions.
    Have you ever respected
    the simple instincts of animals
    that resonates your survival.
    Have you ever perceived
    The blossomed beauty of flowers
    That shrouds you in exotic scents.
    Have you ever cried
    the bitter tears of grief
    that awakes death.
    Have you ever in your life
    Listened to nature
    Just a moment of subtle reflection
    When you can hear the call of your heart.




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      ~*~

    So much to say for just a single moment through which you can feel it all in a matter of a second if you stop, wonder, listen and breathe with your senses instead of your worries. Beautiful captions! Intriguing colors! Surprising ideas! In the middle of it all is a very keen observation that people sometimes fail to see their beautiful surroundings in the process of trying to notice any ugliness.

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    | Posted on 2007-07-06 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      Everyone should take some time off and look around, just bask in nature!

    Very nice write and I look forward to more, I would separate the stanza though to make it easier to read :)
    Amber
    | Posted on 2005-12-21 00:00:00 | by PoeticSoul666 | [ Reply to This ]
      wow! a long stanza! after getting over the shock at the lenght, and actually concentrating on the words, this was a really moving and surprising poem! your questionioning shows that you have really thought things through in both the poem and the things around you! it aptly convays the themes that you are trying to put across!
    | Posted on 2005-12-21 00:00:00 | by bambi144 | [ Reply to This ]


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