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    dots Submission Name: your mourningdots
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    Author: Leon Kennedy
    ASL Info:    15/m/La
    Elite Ratio:    2.78 - 51/75/22
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 1230
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 182



    Description:
       im not done yet. ill finish later. writers block. GWASH!!!!


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    dotsyour mourningdots
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    when im dead and gone will you cry,
    will you mourn or just get on with your life,
    will you think of me
    or just let me become a forgotten memory?





    Submitted on 2005-12-21 13:22:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Short but good. Really good.

    Your picture made me laugh though..
    Lol

    Keep up the good work, this could be alot longer though :)
    Amber
    | Posted on 2005-12-21 00:00:00 | by PoeticSoul666 | [ Reply to This ]


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