I think this is a wonderful poem and you did a great job expressing your feelings but maybe there was something more you could have said to make it complete, Something you could have added to get your point completely across to the readers. I still enjoyed reading it though it is a wonderful poem.
Its pretty good! Just a small thing I would change is Everytime I close m y eyes Your face is all I see The light in your eyes And your smile so sweet You said eyes and it make the flow kindof choppy. Amber
I really enjoyed reading this poem...I think many people could relate to this poem...to me it seemed almost incomplete...like maybe one or two more lines...it was very to the point which is good...but personally i like more metaphorical poems...they give the reader the chance to decide what the poem means to them...where as this poem the meaning is obvious...but it was really good...well written