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    dots Submission Name: victorydots
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    Author: hulk
    Elite Ratio:    1.38 - 6/29/51
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    In one hand I hold the word of god ,the outher a sharp sword . The Bible I hold represents my strong belief in God the Father . The sword a Fighter yes I fight in dulls, like a drowning person fights for air, Despertly . In the end im victoryios ,Nike I shout out before my slain ememy , a few cuts & bruises, But I feel no pain , My Drinulin is pumping . Blood ,sweat and human flesh makes me bitter smelling . The word of God guided me thru this nike, no luck was needed Apollo has struck again




    Submitted on 2005-12-21 16:44:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hey Gnuling! this is a rather nice piece. i like the last line the best. my little Apollo, i'm so proud of you!
    lub and kisses
    hugs and ham sandwiches,
    Mom
    | Posted on 2005-12-29 00:00:00 | by ruejacobs | [ Reply to This ]
      Nice piece Gary. I likes it. There are a few nitpicking spelling errors, but I got the message of the work. I sent you an e-mail and hope to hear from you soon. I love you and your sisters so very much. I am tremendously proud of you, Gary.

    Love,

    Jay
    | Posted on 2005-12-29 00:00:00 | by His Assholiness | [ Reply to This ]



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