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Sally got up early To do her hair and brush her teeth She got dressed in a skirt And put on her fancy socks Sally went downstairs To sit at the table Waiting patiently For her parents to come downstairs Sally thought About the presents she would be getting Thinking about what surprises Her parents had in store Sally knew they were pretending To forget about her birthday she knew it was all an act And today she would be getting what she wanted Sally heard her father coming down the stairs She smoothed down her hair And folded her hands On the table Sally saw her father look at her From across the room She saw the looks that passed on his face Surprise, Question, then guilt Sally saw him come over to her Peck her on the cheek "I'm sorry baby," he said "I forgot." Sally knew he was kidding and that he was just waiting for her mom When she heard Mom come down the stairs She sat up taller Sally saw her mom stop and look at her dad she saw the look that passed between them and she saw her mom's hands begin to shake Sally felt her mother touch her hand "Tomorrow, baby, I'll make up for this, you can get whatever you want. I'm sorry baby, but I forgot." Sally looked at them Not sure if there are joking anymore She looked at them And felt a tear roll down her cheek Sally got up from the table And walked up the stairs She went to her room and sat on the bed Sally laid on her pillow Hugging Mr. Bear And she cried and cried Until she fell back asleep |
a very sad poem and very touching and the way it was put was really genuine , quite a great job you did there, keeps one's attention up all time , good job| Posted on 2005-12-22 00:00:00 | by Tarek Refaat | [ Reply to This ] | good story hear, i think i would like a little more feeling, and a little more description to make it seem more poetic, but i like that it's a poem told in third person, i really like that part. | | Posted on 2005-12-21 00:00:00 | by colerinja | [ Reply to This ] | |