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    dots Submission Name: I CAREdots
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    Author: submarine
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    Words: 72
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsI CAREdots
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    I'm hurting and bleeding
    Because i cared,
    My dreams are shattered
    But i still care.
    I cant understand this
    and i cant control it,
    this new feeling
    Its hard to bear.

    I'm slipping and tripping
    But i wont let go
    this battle of love
    i will get through.
    Its not over yet,
    but i'm still in,
    And with god around,
    i'll find a way to show you,
    I care.




    Submitted on 2005-12-22 00:47:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this its sweet. great write. im new here and i love it already but ive been writting for a while.

    haley
    | Posted on 2006-11-04 00:00:00 | by haley_ima-mess_ | [ Reply to This ]
      this is a sweet poem. this is exactly the kind of poetry i love reading. its simple, easy to read, not too long, well set out, and i can totaly relate. nice work!
    --->Elisa xoxo
    | Posted on 2005-12-24 00:00:00 | by prittee1 | [ Reply to This ]



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