Description: This is the last of my ranting poems... atleast for now. I was simply trying a new kind of style when I wrote them... and I'm not sure if I like it or not. Anywho... this one is pretty straightforward... I still need a title for it.. so if you have any good ideas.. let me know... other then that... leave me some thoughts. :)
Empty Love -------------------------------------------
I’m tied down
Confused
The moment I get comfortable
And happy
I’m ready to say goodbye
For a new short spark
Of joy
I’m young and careless
Full of lust
Lacking love
I’m a whore
Who has never had sex
I’m Estella from Great Expectations
And I break men’s hearts
But not just because I can
It’s just the way it always works out
I don’t like hurting anyone
But I need to start doing things
That are good for me
However, sometimes I just don’t know
If I make the right choices
I don’t want to leave someone
That hasn’t done anything wrong
But it’s part of who I am
He’s just another
Clingy
Loving
Sensitive
Guy
Isn’t that what every girl wants?
The combination doesn’t work for me
Something is lacking
And I don’t know what it is.
i know why the combination doesnt work for you. its because the guy you just described is gay. cant you see it? j/k n e way. i liked the write it was full of self doubt and i like that. great write. -brandon
I think I know what part of your problem is I see a word of doubt in your words about this relationship Remember you have to love yourself before you love another I see you are starting to realize that Once you are more comfortable with that concept your life should start coming together God Bless Ron
It seems you have alot on your mind! It does seem all complicated when it comes to love and knowing ourselves. I enjoyed reading this, it made me rember those days I thought like this. I hope you have some peace in your quest for love and the Future as you continue to search.
Empty...love... it makes me think. a little. about my own relationship. I've been thinking lately, why do people my age suddenly start getting boyfriends or girlfriends in which they 'feel' serious about? it's weird... and un-nerving. I wish it would stop and go back to care-free friendships... but there isn't anything I could change, about it, right? So it was a nice write. ... makese sense to me! xD <3Mi
You have a nice set of thoughts going on here. I don't see anything wrong with it at all. You did have quite a rant though but that's alright. Love is hard to deal with though. It can hurt or it can make you happy or clueless. Yea it's work but depending who the person you are with is, love might turn out well for you guys. But anywho I found this line kind of ironic...
"I’m a whore Who has never had sex"
It kind of makes sense but kind of doesn't at the same time but that's what irony is, right? So I think that was a pretty clever line. Anywho...nothing more to say here.
its what every girl wants, its what every guy wants. why doesnt it work? because that would make love easy. and love is NOT easy. the search for love is meant to weed out those who dont fit with you. if love were easy, we could end up with anybody, not just the one perfect fit we have. without the jigsaw puzzle of love, we would all be automated squares made just to lay side by side instead of interlocking with your one true fit. thats why things dont work.
Submission Name: Empty Love
