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    dots Submission Name: SACRIFICEdots
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    Author: submarine
    Elite Ratio:    2.36 - 125/90/42
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 322
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       its small i know but i think it gives out the message quiet clearly. just tell me wat u guys think......


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    dotsSACRIFICEdots
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    Your love so great,
    For a world that you made,
    A creation full of hypocrites
    Who think they control fate.
    Still you gave for us,
    What you held most dear,
    To show us you cared,
    Like a father for his child,
    Your precious son you gave.....
    As the Greatest Sacrifice.




    Submitted on 2005-12-22 22:35:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Short and to the point. this is a great write and it is to bad that you cant share it with the world but at least you get to share it with us.Merry Christmas and have a blessed New Year all year.
    | Posted on 2005-12-23 00:00:00 | by 3TOMANY | [ Reply to This ]



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