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    dots Submission Name: Songsdots
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    Author: tinkerbellsas
    ASL Info:    22/f/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 67/66/32
    Words: 665
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 718
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    Description:
       these are some songs that I wrote in like 7th grade and I just found them so I thought I would add them


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    dotsSongsdots
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    Open Your Eyes


    Chorus: Open your eyes and see the pain
    That your causing me
    Open yuor heart and feel the pain
    That your causing me

    Then maybe you'll know why
    I'm feeling so bad
    No, you won't care
    You'll just walk out that door
    Not even bothering to say good bye

    And I know I'll feel bad at first
    But I'll learn that I have to move on
    And stop crying over something that was never love
    No, it was never really love

    Chrous
    Then maybe you'll understand the tears

    Then you'll persuade me to let you come back
    You know that it's happened
    So many times before
    So many times that I've got the routine down by heart

    Then you'll leave and return
    Then continue the pain and tears
    And do it over and over again

    Chorus
    Then maybe you'll start to cry

    Next time you might stay for good
    And love me
    Always

    Open your eyes

    ***************************************


    One More Time


    Leave me one more time
    Go away forever you don't love me like you said you did
    There are tears falling from my face
    And you just stand there and laugh at me

    Chorus:
    What's up?
    Why don't you love me
    What did I do to deserve you walking out of my life
    I love you as much as the angels up in the sky
    Baby why don't you love me
    What's up?

    Sometimes life's too much
    I might get angry at you
    But, I still love you like I always have
    Why don't you understand
    Some people might say that I don't love you
    But you should know that it's not true
    'Cause

    Chorus

    I know it hurts to love
    But baby when you love someone enough
    You live with it
    It hurts me to love you
    But I do any way

    Chorus

    Leave me one more time
    Go away forever
    I love you but
    You don't love me
    Oh no you don't

    Chorus

    What's up?
    Why don't you love me
    What's up?



    Hold On


    You try to find a path to freedom
    Now you know there's no way out
    You try to learn everything you can
    Now you know you have to much doubt
    You dream to make it to the top
    Then they change your dream
    You form another dream in your mind
    Then they change it with a scheme

    Chorus:
    Hold on to your dreams
    And you'll find a way out
    Hold on to your dreams
    And you'll make it to the top
    Don't ever let them tell you
    You don't got what it takes
    Hold on to your dreams

    You feel like your the only one left
    You don't know what to do
    You feel like your all alone
    But I'm here too
    You say I'm gonna leave you
    But I'll never let you go
    You say you don't believe me
    But you never let it show

    Chorus

    Hold on, hold on, hold on, hold on
    Hold on to your dreams




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