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    Author: tinkerbellsas
    ASL Info:    22/f/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 67/66/32
    Words: 486
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
       just a bunchg of poems i found also from about 7th grade


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

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    Poem #1 - Biography poem

    Brandi
    Honest, careful, sensitive, persistent
    Sister of William Oatman
    Lover of the earth, peace and God
    Who feels that life is a never ending adventure
    Who needs love, attention and a sense of belonging
    Who gives laughter, understanding and care
    Who fears lonliness, death and shame
    Who would like to see heaven on earth
    A resident of Adams, New York
    Kimmett


    Poem #2 - Limerick

    Paper white
    Like a ghost in the night
    That has no eyes
    It's in disguise
    It floats in the sky like a kite



    Poem #3 - Current Events

    War

    What are we fighting for
    Right outside our own front door
    It's not worth all the cold blood
    But watch out for the flood

    People out counting the dead
    While you are safe in your bed
    Hear the children cry
    "Why did my daddy have to die?"

    They shed so many tears
    We tell them the end is near
    But can we be so sure
    Isn't it all a big blur?


    Song #1

    Heaven



    Everytime I look at you
    There is nothing I can do
    Everytime you look at me
    Love is all I see

    Chorus:
    With all of my heart and soul
    There is just one thing I know
    I can feel it in my heart
    I'm in heaven

    That twinkle in your eyes
    Makes me want to cry
    Tears of joy 'cause you are mine
    I want you with me all the time

    You are the one I love
    I know God is above
    Makin' all my dreams come true
    'Cause he brought me you

    Chorus

    Something about your smile
    Makes me go wild
    It sweeps me off my feet
    When our eyes meet

    It takes my breath away
    When yousay you want to stay
    I dream to be with you
    And I know you love me too

    Chorus

    This love that I feel
    I know that it is real
    You're the only one for me
    You are all I see

    We'll never say good bye
    Even after we die
    We will be together
    Always and forever




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