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    dots Submission Name: The Divinedots

    Author: DanceADream
    ASL Info:    16 f canada
    Elite Ratio:    5.05 - 205/153/29
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 854
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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       i guess its up to u to tell me what you think this poem is explaining. ive already had a couple people tell me different things. its interesting to see how a set of words can mean something totally different to so many different people.

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    dotsThe Divinedots

    Internally crying
    Eternally dying
    For what i questioned fine
    Misunderstood laid the devine
    Who truely spoke the line

    Submitted on 2005-12-24 05:55:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i liked the poem. it was just a little too short for my taste. if it were longer i would be in live with it. but it is still a great write
    | Posted on 2005-12-27 00:00:00 | by Leon Kennedy | [ Reply to This ]
      it's a great idea to ask others how they perceive your poem...

    but i don't really get it...

    maybe i'm just sleepy...
    | Posted on 2005-12-26 00:00:00 | by Mud | [ Reply to This ]
      I get the feeling of someone who is keeping up appearances, and wish they could speak their mind. Maybe someone said something they should have not have said. Whatever the meaning, it is deep. This was nice. I loved the simplicity of the word pattern in this poem. Cood job.

    | Posted on 2005-12-25 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      To me you were referring to the difference between your mother and father and the Lord
    To ME Family is the Right hand of the Lord
    So by respecting and Loving your Parents you also are showing Love for the Lord
    I dont know if that was the theme of thios poem but that was the feelings I got from this write
    God Bless
    Your Friend
    And Thank You for the recent comments
    I am reeally glad we came to be Friends from this site
    | Posted on 2005-12-24 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Sethesin, that means you just really aren't thinking. It's one thing when it doesn't mean something to you, that psychology, but to think it wouldn't mean anything to everyone else... Psychology is like that so that while a single word can mean everything to one person, it means nothing to another, or many many others.
    This poem seemed like life in it's more depressing view. A person who just feels eternally unwell. Sad, and sorrowful. Paranoid, and questioning. I'm going to add this to my favorites list.
    | Posted on 2005-12-24 00:00:00 | by Red_reaper | [ Reply to This ]
      This doesn't mean anything to me and I can't understand how it would mean anything to anyone else.

    - Sethesin
    | Posted on 2005-12-24 00:00:00 | by Sethesin | [ Reply to This ]

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