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    dots Submission Name: *Tears of Blood*dots
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    Author: DrkRomeo_sGirl
    ASL Info:    16/f/somewhere in my mind
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 77/75/26
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Cutting or Mutilation
    Total Views: 1864
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 488



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       i was chattin with a dude in the yahoo pool room and this dude was like totally bumbed. he said he had juss got out of rehab for cutting and these random little thoughts poped inside my head.


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    dots*Tears of Blood*dots
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    Sitin here cryin
    Tryin to stay alive,
    but its not the salty water
    that drips slowly from my eyes.

    Im now sycotic,
    cuting is my ideal,
    to feel the pain,
    then watch it heal.

    Bleeding so much
    it feels like it coming from my eyes,
    pouring away going down my thighs.

    Dying is my destiny
    and my destiny equals pain,
    so watch the blood from my eyes
    and with me go insane.




    Submitted on 2005-12-26 13:14:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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       i like this you seem to cut on you thighs alot i do to that way i can i hide it better
    | Posted on 2007-05-04 00:00:00 | by Cara R.D | [ Reply to This ]
      i fell in love with this one a LONG time ago.
    xoxo
    beautiful.
    | Posted on 2007-02-06 00:00:00 | by XmaryjaneX | [ Reply to This ]
      cutting??!?? i have been cutting myself for 2 years now i have been put in the hospital and i have to say that didn't work worth a [censored]!
    i love your writing...you tell the truth and alot of people relate. GREAT POEM!
    | Posted on 2005-12-28 00:00:00 | by lashelle | [ Reply to This ]
      as a personal cutter, I like ur poem. And i have to disagree with that last guy, if u cut, your are indeed quite InSaNe. This sentece was written to take up space, the comment was real. this sentence too.
    | Posted on 2005-12-27 00:00:00 | by hollowpain | [ Reply to This ]
      Cutting? I've never felt any pain from it. I like the title of this piece quite alot. Going insane doesn't really have anything to do with cutting. In fact it's what some people do to not go crazy.
    I liked the poem, and all the thoughts it shook out of me. Cutting, memories, old faces, learning, random philosophies. It made me want to rant. Quite alot, but I rant alot anyway.
    This poem doesn't really have rhythm in it, but I'll come back to it when I'm not listening to music, because that could very well be the problem.
    I don't know anyone who cuts that tries to stay alive. I might not know enough people...
    | Posted on 2005-12-26 00:00:00 | by Red_reaper | [ Reply to This ]
      it isnt bad for random thoughts that popped into your head. i have written a few in that manner as well. keep up the good work. and dont forget lots of details make it all the more real. good job tho keep up the good work.
    | Posted on 2005-12-26 00:00:00 | by tomboy | [ Reply to This ]


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