Description: Sorry...no challenge taken here for the first person. It was a spur of the moment write. Had a bit of a verbal struggle with they hubby, and took off to get it out of my head. I'm always interested in any feedback...or none...no matter. Yeah...vent...that's what it was! LOL! Emotional state...well, uhm...I was "ticked off!" LOL...I feel better now!
This is a very clever write that almost has a nursery rhyme feel to it That is not an insult That is a compliment I really enjoyed reading this I took this write as one speaking to that little voice in your head that always trys to bring you down but never wins because we find a way to outsmart it God Bless Your Friend Ron
And Thank You for the recent comments I look forward to reading more of your writes
i reall like the ryming it seemed like a little song i would sing to tount some one like just to piss'em off ya know well any way this was good i enjoyed it but now its stuck in my head so im going to go find my ex and sing it to him