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    dots Submission Name: Clichedots
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    Author: sug90
    ASL Info:    14/F/U.S.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.21 - 69/93/34
    Words: 191
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 148
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       Trying to get out of this cliché funk I am in.. so I just wrote a whole thing about clichés.


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    dotsClichedots
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    I wish I would,
    I wish I might
    Be able to see
    At least a dimming twilight

    Laughter is the best medicine,
    Or so they say,
    So forget that apple a day
    Life is life anyway

    The more things stray away
    The more they stay the same
    But the grass is always greener
    Especially when they get more rain

    Winners need their losers
    So time can keep ticking on by
    Still, we’re all winners
    At least we all tried

    Tomorrow no one remembers
    That it seemed a good idea
    At the time
    But clocks can’t change the past
    And the future will never arrive
    Get over it
    Cry me a river build me a bridge
    You know the rest

    And all the while
    The seconds waste on by
    Too many people
    Are just waiting to die

    Staring out my window,
    Looking at these
    Purple mountain majesties
    And I pray
    You can still hear me,

    Understand my message before
    These clichés swallow up
    The everything I thought
    I could say
    You’re worth more
    Than what I mean to say




    Submitted on 2005-12-26 17:59:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      HA! HA! I like this. Cliches are cool because they are so friggin right on most of the times.

    I think you did a nice job in using a lot of the common ones and I like how you mixed them all together to make a pretty genuine write. Good job.
    | Posted on 2006-01-18 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]
      i love the clichéd cliché bit. almost everyone has a pome about clichés and they are all different which is kind of ironic..i liked the poem especially the last stanza.keep it original
    | Posted on 2005-12-26 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]



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