A girls Anthem

Author: MysterydarkPoet ASL Info:    20/f/Aust Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173 Words: 38

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A girls Anthem

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I'm a booty shakin Boy rakin Classy honey Real Funny Luscious baby Drive you crazy Love to shop Non stop Got the lot So hot Damn fine All the time I like ur groove So make a move

Submitted on 2005-12-26 21:19:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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this was nice, short but nice, i write short rymes too. it was kind of funny but you were still explaining your self semi-seriously while doing this. Does that make any sense? Well Much Love, Duece Robbin Hood

| Posted on 2005-12-28 00:00:00 | by Robbing Hood | [ Reply to This ]

this is funny! this should be like every girls anthem im gonna add this as a fav! haha good job! u beleive this rite? ~akaila evonne~

| Posted on 2005-12-27 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]

thats awsome! im not really sure i read it right it makes a great cheer maybe u should change the title to a girls cheer cuz im not sure its an anthem 4say...but idk lol ;P Trevor...~

| Posted on 2006-03-09 00:00:00 | by goomaster03 | [ Reply to This ]

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