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A girls Anthem

Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 38
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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A girls Anthem

I'm a booty shakin
Boy rakin
Classy honey
Real Funny
Luscious baby
Drive you crazy
Love to shop
Non stop
Got the lot
So hot
Damn fine
All the time
I like ur groove
So make a move

Submitted on 2005-12-26 21:19:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this was nice, short but nice, i write short rymes too. it was kind of funny but you were still explaining your self semi-seriously while doing this. Does that make any sense?

Well Much Love,
Robbin Hood
| Posted on 2005-12-28 00:00:00 | by Robbing Hood | [ Reply to This ]
  this is funny! this should be like every girls anthem im gonna add this as a fav! haha good job! u beleive this rite?
~akaila evonne~
| Posted on 2005-12-27 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]
  thats awsome! im not really sure i read it right it makes a great cheer maybe u should change the title to a girls cheer cuz im not sure its an anthem 4say...but idk lol ;P

| Posted on 2006-03-09 00:00:00 | by goomaster03 | [ Reply to This ]

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