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    dots Submission Name: THE "EPIDEMIC" ENDSdots
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    Author: xtremegentleman
    ASL Info:    22/m/FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.57 - 595/778/82
    Words: 224
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
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    Description:
       I'm just trying to defend my friend
    Although she can handle it through the strength of her pen
    But, you know me...I gotta get my lick in
    And teach this DJ Epidemic to never come back again


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    dotsTHE "EPIDEMIC" ENDSdots
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    Now "Here I go" like Mystikal
    Hear the flow? It's original
    Not typical
    My lyrical is spiritual

    In other words
    You can just call me Biblical
    When I grab the pen
    Like Jesus, I perform miracles

    If you ain't heard me
    Soon enough you gon' hear me dude
    The pen moves, I crush you
    You'll feel me dude

    How can you go against a Queen you fling
    The King is back
    And epidemic gets his head cracked

    Put it on wax, you plaque
    And I'm brushing you off
    Li Li got you all dirty
    Now I'm dusting you off

    The boss! Never met X
    Til you messed with his flesh and blood
    I can fit 'em
    Give me O.J.'s gloves

    So I can cure this sickness
    You on my hit list
    I'm a slugger, throw your pitches
    I'm quite sure I can hit this

    Vicious like Pit on a mission, relentless
    The lyrics leave a mark
    There's no way you'll forget this

    But I'm just throwing lil' jabs
    And knocking you back
    Your flow is such a drag
    DJ, I'm stopping the track

    And remember X is nothing to mess with
    Act ocky like flat tires
    I'm patching you up quick


    BYTHCH!

    Put that on your mixtape DJ...




    Submitted on 2005-12-27 12:21:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      definitely respect you holdin it down for li li. never turn your back on family (why do i feel like i just stepped out of a mafia movie...) anyway, you don't need me to inflate your ego (looks like everyone else has already done that lol) but you know you're ill so i'ma just leave it at that. the lil sis is back man, get at me sometime. ...bb...

    XoXo
    ~Tayla~
    | Posted on 2006-01-07 00:00:00 | by Phoenix2004 | [ Reply to This ]
      damn. good job x. it seems like muchie and maggie have the whole site trying to take down djepidemic. this [censored] is ill and it's going on my fave list. i respect that ur defending ur friend. good job dawg
    | Posted on 2006-01-01 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      styling write...nastiness going on here is uncalled for, but this was good to see you switching your style, you write the double rhymes very well and you came out with the treble rhyme scheme which is my favoutite...keep up the good work...happiii new year!
    | Posted on 2005-12-30 00:00:00 | by orpheus | [ Reply to This ]
      Dj epidemic:

    call the CDC we have a viral spree,
    “hello Julie Louise Gerberding”
    “we have a homie here doin’ his nasty thing”

    we got the ID, tagged and bagged,
    look out for he thinks he has clout,
    with all that s*hit he is trying to spout,
    by the way the helicopters in route,
    satellites focus in on this bout.

    yo homies you’re done, this cant be fun,
    all eyes on you, now you on the run,
    they sent a tomahawk payload
    retro fit in it, a 3 megaton set to explode!

    to blast that a*ss with a deadly pass,
    and in the bloom of the fire, a raven on the wire,
    cackles at the sin, see the reaper grin,
    count one homie down, let the next round begin.
    | Posted on 2005-12-29 00:00:00 | by inspirit999 | [ Reply to This ]
      allright, lil'missy. You think your so god inspiring but your a false prophet. You allready made the first sin, self bostfullness. Dont mess with this, I was just going easy from the first verses of the last sentances. Your gona need more than biblicle paragraphs to save your ass, this is lyricle vengance with [censored] thats been talked behind my back when I first left. I had to go handle my bussiness. Because I acctually have alife insted of writing on this thing all the time. I'll inject you with eXtacy in your vains, make you think that getting your fleash stapled together feels great! These raps that I anilate as my voice pantrats your mind, thought and body frame. The wicked will shake after they see what I've done to your body affter the mutalations been comensed for days.
    Why so mad miss, steely? Did mommy and daddy not buy you every thing you wanted this cristmass?
    This ant'the end to the epidemic maddness, you'll die like the rest of them, all [censored] ya' pussy hole with a smith and weston, I love getting those guts all over my chest and stomic. You the type of slut that love the prechers but pluggens.
    | Posted on 2005-12-29 00:00:00 | by djepidemic | [ Reply to This ]
      This was the [censored] man! Your a really good writter man, not bad, not bad. So Hows it going, haveing a good day? Well You defenitely got a lick or two or 17 on epidemic

    Duece
    robbin hood
    *another aberrant general
    | Posted on 2005-12-28 00:00:00 | by Robbing Hood | [ Reply to This ]
      I always stumble upon your words when I really need to hear them, and although I don't frequent your page you have a style I can relate to and flow with.

    Spr"IT"2Uall indeed brother

    I wrote my first rap - Walkin Halo Talkin SHE"IT" - I would be curious of your opinion
    Love,Peace,Joy~Feel,Experience,BE~~~
    tif the epiph creamy like Jif he he he
    | Posted on 2005-12-28 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      lol...and this was just a reminder of the lyrical style that made me stalk you many moons ago...

    "In other words
    You can just call me Biblical
    When I grab the pen
    Like Jesus, I perform miracles"

    by far the best four liner I've come across in a hot minute...and I second with my sista in saying you had me laughing my ass off with this post...

    Good to see you haven't lost skillz B...

    Tina
    EGB
    | Posted on 2005-12-27 00:00:00 | by Brownsdelight | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow! This was so tight! This was justice for me as well. Because this DJ took shots at me as well. I think you just made him think twice. I loved this. This is a fav for sure.

    Maggie
    | Posted on 2005-12-27 00:00:00 | by Magnolia Steele | [ Reply to This ]
      HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHA!

    he's BAAAAAAAAAACK! LOL

    look at ya, comin back with a bang! missed you X, and i know you missed THIS right here, cause you came back flawlessly.

    he shouldn't have messed with Bonnie cause she truely has a Clyde,and ya'll take anyone out in the way! :P

    -nikki
    | Posted on 2005-12-27 00:00:00 | by stolie77 | [ Reply to This ]
      *puts record on and starts scratching*

    Eeera eeera...eera eera...

    LMFAO!

    DO THAT THANG BOY! Man...almost forgot your style there for a little bit! He's been missing since I posted that ish for him...hopefully he will return to see the reinforcements!

    YOU BIT THE SHIYIT OUT OF HIM! I was over here laughing my motha fckin azz off!

    *wipes tear*

    OH MY...You still my Clyde yo! Mad love B!

    Always as one!

    Li
    | Posted on 2005-12-27 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]


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