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Take these scissors to my scribbled star! Fault at my hand of blood, Your destination is suffocation. Doused fire on a plane of leaves, Your elastic mold slowly stretches open. Romance or damnation? There lies an unknown soldier Withering and decayed. Judgment, join hands And meet the same fate. The last left is judgment! The final straw is drawn, Your weight still on my shoulders As I fall with tragic knees Breaking free. My name carved in wood! Suffer of blue regard On midnight sky, Of my eclipse, Blackened rite. In my eyes, These words do speak That I've been living a lie. Cross my arms And bow my head Wearing this heart of lead. Deception, out of mind; It's a trust I fail To apprehend! I'm trying to find the way For this is reality. Time is not an enemy Though I fail to see The night is still young With stars in the sky. The fire is still inside. It still burns inside... |
Great opening. the imagery pulled out is perfect to get the intent of this piece. the tribulations being put forth by this situation. Fault at my hand of blood, Your destination is suffocation. Doused fire on a plane of leaves, Your elastic mold slowly stretches open. I think this second part to the piece lends itself to the helplessness being felt by being in love. Romance or damnation? There lies an unknown soldier Withering and decayed. i like that it is short and sweet. sometimes loveache poems tend to drag on too long. cheers | Posted on 2005-12-27 00:00:00 | by googie | [ Reply to This ] | |