Hybrid Rainbow

Author: Leon Kennedy ASL Info:    15/m/La Elite Ratio:    2.78 - 51 /75 /22 Words: 83

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Hybrid Rainbow

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Take red for all your anger, That puts both of us in danger, Orange for all the shame, For which I am the blame, Yellow for all the fear, That’s takes away all of our cheer, Green for all your greed, Which I always feed, Blue for your confusion, Over me whom you are losing, Purple for my power, That seems to make you cower This is the hybrid rainbow that both of us make, Because of all the things we forsake…

Submitted on 2005-12-27 13:19:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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at first...i was like what kind of a person would write this? who would want to take the joy out of the simple things in life that are yet so complicated and beautiful...but the last 2 lines broght it together. next time i see a rainbow i will be more appreciative (not that i can spell that) xoxoxomuchlove-ash

| Posted on 2005-12-30 00:00:00 | by DanceADream | [ Reply to This ]

thats ccooo i like that the rainbow is not a happy thing and that we shount think colors neccecsarly happiness hybrid rainbow thats a nice way of lookin at it normally when i think rainbow i think gay but now ill think hybrid Queen Darkness of the Grim Draco

| Posted on 2005-12-28 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]

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