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    dots Submission Name: A Silent Prayerdots
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    Author: submarine
    Elite Ratio:    2.4 - 128/91/45
    Words: 137
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       just needed to tell someone my pain... thought i'll try the man upstairs rather than another human who'll just break your trust and hurt more.


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    dotsA Silent Prayerdots
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    I sit alone crying,
    I'm wounded inside,
    No mortal soul to share the pain,
    No one to talk with.
    And as tears roll down my face,
    I offer up a silent prayer....

    I'm lost oh God,
    I cant find my way back,
    I need some help here,
    Just put me on the right track.
    Oh please, Hear my cries,
    And wipe these tears,
    with tender love carry me,
    And ease away my fears.

    This path is full of trials,
    That make me wonder,
    If all hope is in vain?
    My soul is weak,
    With no strenght to move on,
    You have to guide me,
    And help me live on.

    God i know your listening,
    To every single word.
    And as i close my eyes to sleep,
    I know...
    That this Silent Prayer is heard.




    Submitted on 2005-12-27 13:47:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow, that was so awesome, i liked it.. i could totallt relate to what u were saying.. ive added it to my favs.. great work, keep it up..
    | Posted on 2005-12-29 00:00:00 | by AnointedPoetess | [ Reply to This ]
      i like it. you did a good job of putting your words together. you had a few typing errors. keep up the good work and keep writing no matter what. it is one of the best way to express ones self and keep praying to God he will help you thru anything.
    | Posted on 2005-12-27 00:00:00 | by tomboy | [ Reply to This ]


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