Really beautiful To me this speaks of the beauty of creation and how every new life brings renewed life to the earth Excellent write!!! Let me be a little comedic here too if you will let me In Lithuanian which is what I am 50 percent of on my fathers side To say thank you is Achu (pronounced ah-chew My mother is french canadien and she used to always run around saying God Bless You everytime he said that This really brought back funny memories You have an incredible talent of making one smile God Bless Ron
Oh I think this is lovely. Such a journey it is too! And you have taken us back to the beginning of giving with birth being indeed the first "gift". This haiku is very well written and expressed and the message here is a very inspirational one indeed. And this is perfect for the Christmas season! Very nice job with this one. Hope your holidays were all that you wanted and filled with happiness. Best wishes to you for the upcoming new year! Take care.
Hm. It's alright. I have never liked the haiku much. I admire it because you have to fit the entire thought into three lines that only contain 17 syllables. But everything I feel, think, etc. comes it out with such complexity that it's near impossible to box it into haiku form. Anyway. Yours was lovely, had a pleasant message.