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    dots Submission Name: Towers of vicedots
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    Author: Meckes
    ASL Info:    18/M/NJ
    Elite Ratio:    5.66 - 137/120/37
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 184
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    Bytes: 457



    Description:
       I was born and raised in Atlantic City and have seen the casinos destroy people's lives... even one person that I know extremely well... This is just a short little thing I wrote... it's still a work in progress... Tell me what you think


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    dotsTowers of vicedots
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    Thunder brushed towers
    find my eyes-
    seeking out the masses,
    trapping one
    and one more
    and another still.
    The moths flutter in
    ever closer to
    the iridescent flame
    spelling doom,
    spelling Trump.

    A vacuum
    drawing in Humanity
    A sword
    severing purse strings
    A God
    delivering false hope
    An opiate
    habituating
    annihilating




    Submitted on 2005-12-28 13:38:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Its a little hard to understand... I always read the work before the description so with out your description I would have been completly lost... but thats not always a bad thing it all depends on what you as the writter want people to get out of it... So dou you want me to see thoes people who's lives were ruiend or do you want me to relarte it to my own life?
    Hannah
    | Posted on 2005-12-28 00:00:00 | by Devils Angel | [ Reply to This ]



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