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    dots Submission Name: Red, White & Bluedots
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    Author: Tarek Refaat
    ASL Info:    24/m/Egypt
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 370/508/212
    Words: 188
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsRed, White & Bluedots
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    Red, White & Blue

    Red, white and blue
    These are the colors I feel so true
    The ones I see mostly around
    The ones I try to seek

    Red for blood that runs through our veins
    That gives our lives a meaning
    That turns our heat up when in love
    That pumps through our hearts
    When that special person takes your breath away

    White is cotton
    White is clouds
    White is the color so neat inside
    No impurities, no stains
    Simply sincerity
    It’s that plain
    White is just the truth to me

    Blue the color of sadness to most
    The color of beauty in my own eyes
    The color of the sea
    The color of the sky
    The color of freedom
    Calmness,
    Meditation
    An overwhelming sense of relaxation

    These three colors mean a lot
    If not to you
    Then to me
    Although every color has its own place
    These are the ones
    Which top my taste.

    Red, White and Blue
    These are the colors I feel so true
    These are my guide to a life so new








    Submitted on 2005-12-29 00:10:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      you've gotta be an imaginitive person...I think its completely original and simple...VERY easy to understand, and a totally new concept...
    Simple words, subtle rhyming and powerful imagination-
    but you could do with

    "
    White is cotton
    White is clouds
    White is the color so neat inside
    No impurities, no stains
    Simply sincerity
    It’s that plain
    White is just the truth to me

    Blue the color of sadness to most
    The color of beauty in my own eyes
    The color of the sea
    The color of the sky
    The color of freedom"

    a bit more description of emotions and subject that you find are related to colors...
    something that you did in the first stanza.
    -Devrath
    | Posted on 2005-12-29 00:00:00 | by Devrath | [ Reply to This ]
      Whew! Excellent! So strong, so simple. Who knew someone could take three colors and elaborate their meaning so beautifully? Great write. Keep up the good work. xoxoxo
    | Posted on 2005-12-29 00:00:00 | by UNIQUEWOODS69 | [ Reply to This ]



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