It seems nothign matters now
Like all my feelings are gone
I can't laugh, I can't cry
But in my heart I just wanta die
Seems kinda strange
from over welming emotion to nothing
so down and low
but evan by myself I wont let it show
doesnt seem fare to keep it inside
while my feelins use to flow
now it seems the tears are gone
But I don't feel any better
one day I will be happy
but that day is a ways away
if nothign good comes of this low
then I guess dead I shall stay
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Submission Name: This Feeling of Nothing
- is that there isn't really a flow...make sure the lines flow to the next fluidly...but this was overall a nice write.