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It's Funny How I Write


Author: Poeticprincess
ASL Info:    18/f/Germany
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Class/Type: Rant /Misc
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I don't know this was a random thing, you know something that you start writing and then when you stop you're like..wow i wrote all that. Anyways tell me what you think.


It's Funny How I Write



Funny how i find myself
writing to myself
writing shit that'll neva be read
or will neva get famous
before i'm dead
funny how i find myself
how i find myself...
writing of love, hate lust
or just plain crazy things
it's funny how you look at me, smile
funny how i write about lust, how bad
i want to fuck him maybe even her
it's hilarious how i find myself here
writing about thug life, how i miss him
how i love mom, dad..funny
how i write about brothers
my best friends, funny how i write
what i feel, not what i'm told too
funny how i write about happiness
rape, suicide, my addiction to..
funny how i write about you..




Submitted on 2005-12-29 18:27:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i like how you wrote "i want to [censored] him maybe even her" that was funny. a lot of things are funny in funny ways keep writing. i love your work.
love
tina
| Posted on 2006-02-24 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
  ahh, this was really good, especially the last line. it was like damn. u really pulled this one off. this is definitely going on my fave list.

it's funy how i write about the complications of my nation
writing about the problems we're facing
due to our own selfish creation
it's funny how i write about life on the streets
brothas left in ditches deceased
and pimps are destroying [censored]es' beliefs
it's funny how i write about love, in a world full of hate
it's funny how little girls get raped
and the criminal escapes
it's funny that i still have hope after Katrina
it's funny how we sit here waiting to get checks from FEMA
it's funny how i write i write about things that i see
you and me searching for identity's through completely different destinys
it's funny how i write about who we outta be
it'll be funny when i get assassinated by the powers that be
| Posted on 2006-01-09 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
  this is good, I like the message... the only critisizm is that I don't understand the rhyme scheme..... but thats no big deal or nothing...I'm lookin forward to doing a song with you... if you can sing or rap, maybe we can record it
| Posted on 2006-01-02 00:00:00 | by maninthemirror | [ Reply to This ]
  hi, yes it is kinda funny to get letter-poem you wrote.

'"funny how i write about happiness
rape, suicide, my addiction to..
funny how i write about you..
"
| Posted on 2005-12-29 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
  well im shure mast of us can relate to this im not shure if i like it or not its one of those ya know. any way maby revise it a little

xoxo
that girl
| Posted on 2005-12-29 00:00:00 | by sweet sorenity | [ Reply to This ]


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