The Crow Man -------------------------------------------
The Crow Man
I know a man who says he became a crow.
I says, Did you really become a crow
Or was it all in your head?
He says, All I know is I became a crow.
I says, But was it all in your head?
He says nothing to me
And walks away over the hills.
Later that day I feel so lonesome I could die.
your tenses bother me. although it should be the least of my worries when it comes to this. a crow man. i don't know what I see as symbolism. or allegory. or meaning. this is hard on me. i'm trying to see what aimee_ sees. there's is nothing too much and nothing too little, because i dont' see what you're going for. so you couldnt' have missed it. your last time sounds real similar to a line from Catcher in the Rye. but i don't understand why you feel depressed. maybe that's the problem.
Maybe i'm just reading this poem wrong or something, but i'm really confused by it...but i think that as long as it makes sense to you then it doesnt matter if it does to anyone else
Submission Name: The Crow Man
