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    dots Submission Name: Bloodstain Lettersdots
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    Author: withblindedeyez
    ASL Info:    19/m/nc
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 83/121/58
    Words: 138
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
    Total Views: 791
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    Bytes: 906



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    dotsBloodstain Lettersdots
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    (Verse 1)
    I dug this hole, to rest my soul
    Leaving my heart behind
    Its hard to say, these words
    Believe the note I left you
    I’m not coming home anymore…..

    (chorus)
    I’m gone, so long
    I’m never returning again
    All I had left these words
    But they all went unheard
    Try to forget me, remember
    These bloodstain letters to you…..

    (Verse 2)
    I’ve tried so hard, for so long
    Not to fall back down
    You are the shovel to this hole
    Like throwing salt in the wounds
    Believe the note I left you
    I’m not coming back, goodbye….

    (Chorus)

    (Verse 3)
    I’ve heard all your lies
    Fallings into your eyes
    6 feet and falling down
    Deeper into this hole
    Here’s the note I left you
    Believe me when I say, goodbye.




    Submitted on 2005-12-29 23:01:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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