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    dots Submission Name: somethin'dots
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    Author: maninthemirror
    ASL Info:    17/m/arkansas
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 224/318/109
    Words: 405
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
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    dotssomethin'dots
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    smoke somethin, drank somethin, take somethin/
    slang somethin, sell somethin, trap somethin/
    get tipsy till your mind is nothin/
    then deal and deal, keep that money coming/

    Robbing Hood-
    Im drunk, high, and obscene/
    chase hennessey with green/
    T.W. Adams and Chronic/
    Rum and Turtle, Im on it/
    sittin in the basement hittin my pipe/
    swallowing some alcohol of the vodka type/
    I get high before, and then drunk as i write/
    Im not an alcoholic/
    I just drink till I vomit/
    Then Ill smoke buddha with my team/
    Thats the way of life for an aberrant king/
    Yea, thats the way we ball/
    Get tipsy till we fall/
    Forceing ourselves to crawl/
    To my dealer to order myself a bag/
    Good thing thats me or else Id be weedless and sad/
    Trappin, it aint no crime/
    Its just another way for me to get mine/


    smoke somethin, drank somethin, take somethin/
    slang somethin, sell somethin, trap somethin/
    get tipsy till your mind is nothin/
    then deal and deal, keep that money coming


    smoke somethin, drank somethin, take somethin/
    slang somethin, sell somethin, trap somethin/
    get tipsy till your mind is nothin/
    then deal and deal, keep that money coming/

    maninthemirror-
    now I be walkin down the greeny plant crop
    aint got alot it just be the leaves and tops
    but I take advantage, pickin from the planted pot
    now I got an ounce, I be smokin what I got
    don't try and tell that your shit is better
    my homie is the hood deliver in any weather
    rockin hella bongs, so many pounds of the weed
    I got the green goblin, like bill gates got cheese
    role down the window in the lincoln, so the shit can air out
    take a trip by the hoes and empty out they bank account
    you might call me crazy but you gotta try the fry
    although it sorta scare me when they said that I could die
    find out why they call me sales when I get the hookup
    bitch, you try and fuck me over, I swell your lip up
    I know a ho with weed has my weed indeed
    so I take the bitches shit and get the high I need

    smoke somethin, drank somethin, take somethin/
    slang somethin, sell somethin, trap somethin/
    get tipsy till your mind is nothin/
    then deal and deal, keep that money coming




    Submitted on 2005-12-30 01:17:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hell yeah all day all night gotta stay high gotta get wasted sobriety suks! This is great you should get a beat for it and put it on an album or sumthin. i dunno. im gonna go get stoned now. bye bye...
    | Posted on 2006-01-30 00:00:00 | by Di Re Rakord | [ Reply to This ]
      *puff puff*

    Why ya'll bein stingy? Man...I wanna smoke and drink too! LOL!

    *sings*

    I smoke...I drank...
    I'm suppose to stop but I can't...

    LOL!

    ya'll are doing it and doing it well. Great to see that some people can get together and create work.

    Much love!

    Li Li
    | Posted on 2006-01-01 00:00:00 | by Munchie_1226 | [ Reply to This ]
      i can't believe y'all. damn i wouldn't expect a post about getting high and getting drunk on a poetry site but this was pretty good. smooth bo fellas. y'all recruted anybody yet?
    | Posted on 2005-12-31 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]


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