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    dots Submission Name: Chosendots
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    Author: E.S. McLaughlin
    ASL Info:    16/f/North Carolina
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 9/14/5
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Religious
    Total Views: 846
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 496



    Description:
       This piece is short, but I think that it comes from my heart. I just want people who read this to be able to come back and say that they understand where I was going. It's just a little something from me to God.


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    dotsChosendots
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    Sittin' here
    All alone
    Writin' these rhymes
    I look back over my life
    And I ponder the times
    That You had my back
    Even when You didn't have to
    Cut me slack
    Still loved me
    No matter what I'd do
    And I still can't see the reason why You chose me
    A simple girl fighting her way out to be free
    But you saw that
    And you anointed me
    To be the chosen one You always knew I could be




    Submitted on 2005-12-30 08:54:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I get your message, and even though it's a fine piece of poetry it still short something,I would have gone more into how worthless I am/was, and How Great God is, and how Strange it is for Him to pick Me for Hid Amazing mission. Because you obviously want to testify for God, but if you want people people to see how Great He is you should give more detail about His soft nature, His love and His Power. what do you think? but good poem, I liked it.
    | Posted on 2006-02-22 00:00:00 | by Ant | [ Reply to This ]
      Woot, woot! dats da stuff right dere! i liked dat! keep it up ma. much love! u got talent fo sho'. :O) keep pressin fo ya blessin' boo.. what u said is so true.. i fav it will be! Holla
    | Posted on 2005-12-31 00:00:00 | by AnointedPoetess | [ Reply to This ]
      Not to shabby I must say.

    It is nice to have something like God have your back and love you with each of your breaths.
    There is that guideness that we all need and have to have.
    I understand where you are coming from and can see where you want to go.

    ~shawn
    | Posted on 2005-12-30 00:00:00 | by armand | [ Reply to This ]


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