Description: This piece is short, but I think that it comes from my heart. I just want people who read this to be able to come back and say that they understand where I was going. It's just a little something from me to God.
Writin' these rhymes
I look back over my life
And I ponder the times
That You had my back
Even when You didn't have to
Cut me slack
Still loved me
No matter what I'd do
And I still can't see the reason why You chose me
A simple girl fighting her way out to be free
But you saw that
And you anointed me
To be the chosen one You always knew I could be
I get your message, and even though it's a fine piece of poetry it still short something,I would have gone more into how worthless I am/was, and How Great God is, and how Strange it is for Him to pick Me for Hid Amazing mission. Because you obviously want to testify for God, but if you want people people to see how Great He is you should give more detail about His soft nature, His love and His Power. what do you think? but good poem, I liked it.
It is nice to have something like God have your back and love you with each of your breaths. There is that guideness that we all need and have to have. I understand where you are coming from and can see where you want to go.