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    dots Submission Name: Helicoter Pimpdots
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    Author: Fraser
    ASL Info:    26
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 30/55/32
    Words: 482
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Misc
    Total Views: 235
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1344



    Description:
       this songs about a pimp that performs her actions from a helicopter. She watches from her helicopter and see her ladies in action


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    dotsHelicoter Pimpdots
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    2 times - Helicopter pimp with her ladies, doing
    wild tricks, driving them crazy

    Verse 2 times - Helicopter pimp your girls are
    sweet
    no worries here their on the street

    2 times - come get the ladies chopper pimp
    their getting lonely it'll be a simp

    Chorus 4 times - Helicopter lady cute as can be, take me on, take care of me

    (simutaneously)
    1. (repeated) take care of me 2. Hello put a mink
    on my shoulders
    keep me warm
    love my business
    that i work so
    hard on
    love my bosoms

    Verse 2 times - Spinning those blades round and round
    their dresses move up and down

    2 times - whores get busy they meet many men
    don't wear out your bodies, stick to the plan

    Chorus 4 times - Helicopter lady cute as can be, take me on, take care of me

    2 times - Helicopter pimp with her ladies doing wild tricks, driving them crazy




    Submitted on 2005-12-30 09:19:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow, this was um... interesting. Funny I have to admit, but scary as well. :P I think that this pretty pimp would be an enthralling person to talk to. But I dont think that she would be as entertaining as her inventor. lol. I think that this should go under comedy.
    | Posted on 2005-12-30 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]


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