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    dots Submission Name: New years resolutiondots
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    Author: luvy
    ASL Info:    19/F/AZ
    Elite Ratio:    4.45 - 270/168/35
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       yeah i dont know if its good or not and i dont realy care but i was just thinking about the new year and this year and some of the shit i bin through and this is what i got. this year hasnt bin my best year


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    dotsNew years resolutiondots
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    The new year is almost here

    time to amke resolutions that most people dont keep.

    like work out more study harder adn get better grades

    Speaking of resolutions i still need to make mine

    I resolve to be a better me in the new year

    To try not to let people hold me back in 2006

    This year ive been pushed around held dow and in some ways controled

    as the new year approaches i want to break the bonds that hold me down

    so watch out world

    With the coming of the new year comes a new me

    The new me aint taking shit from no one




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      gena is not to be [censored]ed with. yeah this one is ok. but i can see why everyone can relate. i think a lot of us feel this way. i know i never have a resolution. i just strive to keep being me and i try to live my life the way that i want to for as long as i can. glad to see u posting again. much love.
    | Posted on 2005-12-31 00:00:00 | by unknown soldier | [ Reply to This ]
      its sweet n nice...
    well come check out my stuff plz n comment
    i need ppl commentin bout my stuff so please...check out women so long take care and life as we know it
    | Posted on 2005-12-31 00:00:00 | by anooplokur | [ Reply to This ]
      hey gena! going to da movies waz awesome!anyway this is good! and who pushed u around and i hope i didnt control u! ILOVEU SOOOOOOOOO MUCH!
    ~akaila evonne~
    | Posted on 2005-12-30 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]
      well I like the point you are trying to make here and I really think I can connect...with wanting to be a new person but it's probably just going to be another broken wyhme ya know? o well either way this was more a thought than anything but I guess Misc. was the best catogory.
    peace.
    ~silent
    | Posted on 2005-12-30 00:00:00 | by silent_death12 | [ Reply to This ]
      ik how you feel i want to leave behind the old me and bring a new e to the world...the only i want o bring to your attention is a few spelling mistakes...and you could go into what you want to change baout yourself..ik you wrote that you are changing the way you have been controlled but you could embellish a bit...just a bit...

    ><><>MartiniMadeLve<<><><><>
    | Posted on 2005-12-30 00:00:00 | by MartiniMadeLvr | [ Reply to This ]


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