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    dots Submission Name: emotoxindots
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    Author: namesdontmatter
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/89/29
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsemotoxindots
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    pushed to the limit by emotion
    suffocated by feeling
    euphoria, close cousin to ecstasy
    and depression which needs no introduction
    we are all quite familiar

    the gloves are off
    my hands are cold
    the edges are sharper than usual

    tears flowing easily as all the times before
    laughter which isnt as expected
    the music is getting
    louDER, LOUDER
    and now its gone
    shut off

    forgetting is so easy with a bottle in hand
    but i think i like this twitchy mental breakdown
    very refreshing




    Submitted on 2005-12-30 14:58:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      awesome...I agree with RRB...new approach to an old idea...it doens't rhyme just right, which asss to the mood...totally excelllent. Not much else to say, other than keep up the writing!

    Storm
    | Posted on 2005-12-30 00:00:00 | by OrionsStorm | [ Reply to This ]
      This was interesting. A new approach to an old idea. I loved the title. I think the format was written nicely. Good piece, well done.
    LeAnna
    | Posted on 2005-12-30 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]


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