OOO i really liked it, its like your just moving on with your life, tell me if i'm wrong, but it seems ur being freed from the cluches of sum1 or sumthing. Good poem ~*TruDeath
I AM FREE...powerful words. It's good when you can feel that, it's even better if you have a spiritual connection to God or a Higher Power who certifies that you are indeed free from your past and your are redeemed and ready to start over. This was a very impowering poem. One that made the reader see you went through alot to be declared free. I liked the spacing you used and structure of this poem. I can find no fault in this. Wonderfully done.
this is exactly where i am at today, so you've just reinforced that wonderful feeling for me. i feel like i've been on a vacation from God's love and grace, and that is not where i want to be, and that was my own doing.
thank you so much for sharing this.
peace&love, ~Cat
p.s. i just realized i'd already commented on this, but that's okay. it hit it's mark again!
Yeeehah ...I love this...it's a good write ...I'm so with you on that one ...i decided 2006 would be my year...starting on the first i was just going to fix everything and be more possitive and all that good stuff you read about in self help books ...This really made me smile and feel empowered ...And what more could you want from a poem ? ....beautiful
This is an exceptionally well written poem. Full of hope and inspiration. It's good to get out from under and smell the fresh air again. So many times we refuse to change and are left lonely and bitter. Glad to see things are looking up for you. Enjoy your freedom, you deserve it! Carol
i really needed to read this today, Cheryl. i am trying desperately to move forward and follow my dreams, washing away the past and the heartache that seems to haunt me daily.. i know that God answers our prayers, He does. the only thing is that we have to do the footwork, so back up off my dress Satan, 'cause i'm trying to dance here! thank you for this.
Nice! I may take part of this as my own New Year's resolution. The entire write is good. I like this -> "Yesterday’s memories I have conquered, binding the demons guilt, grief, and doom." <- I'm getting there. Thanks for sharing this. It's great to read your writings again.
This reads as a new years resolution that can be read and followed every day of the year. So uplifting Cheryl! Glad to see you writing and commenting again. Hope all is well and let freedom fly, whoo-hooo!
Whatever you have gone through - whatever lies ahead - you claim "IT" & make "IT" your own girl! You have much beauty & strength & I'm glad to see you back Amen! Love,Peace,Joy & Smiles to share tif
Nicely done. It's a starting over phase that is brought in with the new year. We as people sit here and dwell on the thing of the past and how we would have done them different if only we had known what lied ahead.
This write my friend serves as a great form of inspiration.
You know, Cheryl, this could have been written by many different people, it's almost an anthem.
I like it a lot, I can see it presented with a background pic for each line, I hope you see all the rainbows you truly deserve. They come after rain, you know?
this is too short in my opinion but you do get your point across i will give you that...this jsut isnt my favourite poem...but i do relate with wiping the slate clean and starting over like becoming a new person...
not too bad, you related it to previous life which made it sound really good. i enjoyed reading it and it made me feel happy... good write... also enjoyed the way you ended it by shouting "I AM FREE" hope to read more of your writes
Submission Name: I AM FREE
