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    dots Submission Name: Tha Choppa Gundots
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    Author: Robbing Hood
    ASL Info:    16/m/Ark
    Elite Ratio:    3.41 - 26/35/10
    Words: 228
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Passion
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    Bytes: 1447



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    dotsTha Choppa Gundots
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    [robbin hood]
    You know we do it like that/
    got that choppa gun in my lap/
    don't be lookin when you hear that ak47 clap/
    you know it coming from that 64 lac/
    shot you in the face/
    17 seconds later i'm the only one left in the place/

    [maninthemirror]
    17 minutes later I step through the door/
    seeing hood standing over the dead in the floor/
    all i can do is laugh as I'm walking up to em/
    these bitches laugh and shit now see what happened to em/
    they dead, hoes dont come back/
    They in the trunk of the lac, when that choppa gun clap/

    [robbin hood]
    kings back on the attack/
    ak 47, you can't top that/
    with a drum attached/
    killa is the way i act/
    I get my respect, one day/
    I'm hot, but not too hot to get ont he block and play/

    [maninthemirror]
    Bang Bang Bang/
    My thoughts are diranged/
    Like Mike Myers with a lil' Buddha/
    And I'm smooth like ghandi, just a lil' rudda/
    put in another clip of the aberrant flow/
    fuck with the kings, we'll come to your show/

    [robbin hood]
    Money on my mind/
    47 when I'm on the grind/
    I'm ahead of my Time/
    I'm ahead of my ryme/
    All day Ak, you know/
    fully atomatic, now thats my flow/




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